TUESDAY'S BIZ TIP:

IT'S WHO YOU KNOW


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You want the truth? Can you handle the truth? Having a career in screenwriting all comes down to who you know. The business side of it is all about personal relationships - which means it's not that much different than any other business. When I graduated from high school and moved out of my parent's house, I got a job with Safeway grocery stores on the stocking crew. How did I get that job? I was working full time in a K-Mart that was the anchor store on one side of a shopping center - the Safeway was the anchor on the other side. The manager of the Safeway store ate in the same couple of restaurants in the shopping center that everyone else did. I knew him well enough to say hello. One day, I asked him how to get a (union) job at Safeway. He gave me the skinny and said I could use his name as a referral. I had to ask his last name... his name badge just said "Don". Screenwriting isn't that much different.

My first deal came from a local director who made exploitation films. We aren't talking Hollywood films, we're talking backyard films. He made these kung fu movies that played in drive ins starring no one you've ever heard of. I didn't meet this director at some lavish Hollywood party - we were hundreds of miles away from Hollywood. This director had gone to the same community college I went to (in my home town). I made little short films, he made little 35mm features. We would bump into each other at the bargain matinee. He saw one of my short films, liked it, ask me if I wanted to work on his next kung fu film. No pay. I worked on his next film, was easy to get along with (and I said funny things). This was miles away from Hollywood - this was not Spielberg, this was not a movie that was ever going to play indoors. It was a drive in exploitation movie called WEAPONS OF DEATH. Because I loved movies and was easy to get along with (and funny) when the director needed someone to do a page one rewrite on his next low budget kung fu movie, he called me. The script was called THE FALCON'S CLAW. I threw out everything (including the title) and started from scratch... that was my first paid job - NINJA BUSTERS. All of this was done in my home town - the movie was made there, too. All due to that big Hollywood connection... this guy who went to the same community college that I did.

He saw my short film, and I gave him a copy of one of my scripts.


TRAVELLING SCRIPTS

My second sale was ten years later...

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My first "Hollywood sale" was a screenplay called COURTING DEATH that sold to a company at Paramount. I was living in my home town (not Hollywood), and had zero connections. But I had scripts.

After writing that low budget drive in flick NINJA BUSTERS which was made in my home town by a local director... I went back to the day job for a decade. I wrote 3 scripts a year - which is just a page a day. Around 7 or 8 years back at the day job I optioned a script called TREASURE HUNTER to a company in Beverly Hills for $5k. I read an advert in the back of Variety - they were looking for a jungle adventure script. I sent a logline and they requested the script. My big connection was - a subscription to Weekly Variety. Hey, you can read that stuff online, now.

The director of NINJA BUSTERS was making direct to video movies after drive ins closed down, and worked with a local actress who was, um, very attractive, and single. And so I gave her my new screenplay and said, "There's a role in here that is perfect for you." She took the screenplay, read it, and promptly moved to Los Angeles. I am unlucky in love.

In Los Angeles she was hired to play Victim #5 in a low budget horror film. Her role was basically taking off her top and being killed. She gave my script to a guy on the crew (!) and told him there's a role in here that is perfect for her. Now my script began travelling around Los Angeles - everyone gave it to their best connection in the business. This is a business where people do favors to advance their careers. So my scripts floated around town, and three years later I am putting on my steel toed boots to go to work at my warehouse day job when the phone rings....

The guy on the phone says he's Daniel calling from (a company at) Paramount, is my screenplay COURTING DEATH still available?

Okay - obviously my friend Van Tassell playing a practical joke on me. We play practical jokes on each other all the time (still do). We had just gone to a party where Van had drank way too much, so on Monday while he was at work, I had every woman I know call his answering machine and say, "Hello, this is Heather, we met at that party Friday night and I'd really like to see you again, I gave you my number, call me." So he comes home from work and there are a dozen women who want him to call them, and he calls me and says, "Bill, did you see what I did with all of these phone numbers?" So I figured this was payback.

"If you are really at Paramount, Daniel, how about giving me a number and I'll call you back." Daniel gives me a number with a 213 area code. Van really did his homework on this one! I call back, and realize it is not a joke. I ask where they got the script, and Daniel says a name of someone I don't know. This script traveled all over town and ended up at this company at Paramount.

Sold it. David Fincher was attached to direct at one point in time. I hated the idea because all he'd done was a couple of Madonna videos. But here's the thing: You need a script that travels. A script that opens doors. Your SCREENPLAY is your best connection. Yes, you need to network, but when someone agrees to read your screenplay - you need to have the screenplay that gets *them* to network using your screenplay. You are networking with people who are networking. You don't want to be the Weakest Link... You want to be the reason why everyone else is using YOUR SCREENPLAY in their networking.

The company at Paramount flew me to LA, bought the script for about 2 years worth of warehouse wages, and never made the film.

So my big connection is this guy who made low budget kung fu films in my home town... an a woman that I had a crush on. I think anyone could get a connection like that.

I *wish* I had a cousin who could pass someone a script. That would save me a lot of hard work.


HOLLYWOOD CONNECTIONS

You have to make your own connections. Since moving to LA, everything I've sold has come from a query letter or a phone call or me figuring out how to track down some producer. You don't need to have relatives in the business, you don't even have to know anyone in the business... you just have to *get to know* someone in the business. And you don't have to know anyone important. I knew a no-name actress! In another tip I mentioned an office temp I pitched my script to, who is now a producer of films like SPARTAN with Val Kilmer. If you can become Steven Spielberg's best friend, that's great... but it's not required. Your best connections might be the people around you - people you already know! Do you know someone who wants to direct movies? That person may be the *next* Spielberg.

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An actor from my home town is now a minor star (I just saw him in a movie) - he was at a party at my house once and I hardly talked to him. My mistake. At the premiere of one of my films I discovered that one of the stars not only came from my home town, she went to high school with my sister! I didn't know her back then. When my hometown newspaper did an article about my Paramount sale, they sent this high school kid to interview me. That's how imporatnt I was. I helped that kid make some movies of his own... and now he's the director of the SHARKNADO movies ofr SyFy Channel. Another guy from a rival high school is now a producer on THE SIMPSONS... why didn't I hang out with these folks back home when all we had were dreams of Hollywood? Even though I made some connections back home, I could have made many, many more. You still can - find the people in your home town who are interested in making movies and hang out with them. You all share the same dreams, why not work together?

Hollywood connections aren't that much different. Send letters, make phone calls, go to film screenings, attend events, *meet people*, do whatever it takes to make some sort of connection. It doesn't have to be with the top guy at the company, it can be with an office temp! Anyone you meet or talk to is a connection... but you won't make that connection unless you go out there are meet people. Send letters. Send cards. Make phone calls.

I know a screenwriter who was the personal assistant to a movie star... and sold a screenplay due to the connections that he made.

Sounds like "who you know", right? If you were a personal assistant to a movie star, you could sell a screenplay, too. Hell. anybody could, You get to meet all of the people that the movie star knows! Producerts and directors and agents and managers! How could you NOT selll a screenplay? You are jealous of this screenwriter for having all of that easy access to producers and agents!

Except that screenwriter began as an unsold screenwriter in Los Angeles, who needed a day job to pay the bills. So he got a job as an assistant to some low level actor - walking his dog, doing his laundry, all of the crap that the actor didn't want to do. Writing scripts the whole time. An actor higher up the totem pole saw how hard he worked and hired him away - at more money. Same crappy work though. He continued to write scripts between picking up clothes from the dry cleaners and the actor's floor and picking up the actor's dog's poop off the sidewalk. Glamorous! Eventually he was hired by a guy who had actually starred in movies - because he was an assistant who worked his ass off. Dependable. The star found out that he wrote scripts and asked to read one - and liked it. Passed it to someone... and after a few scripts got passed around the star's business associates, one of them sold.

Now, that's "who you know", right?

But it's also working you butt off to get to the point where you know people.

Meanwhile, I know a guy who went to Hollywood High with a bunch of famous Brat Pack actors. He had great connections with all of these stars! And wrote terrible scripts. Do you know what all of those great connections did for him? Nothing. Because it still all comes down to the screenplay.

Since moving to LA, I've had a bunch of studio meetings that came from someone being passed one of my scripts - so my scripts are making connections for me, too. The truth is - there are so many bad scripts in Hollywood, that if you have a good one people will pass it around. Your scripts are your most important way of making connections. If you have a great script, you don't need great connections... but you still need to get that script out of your house and into *somebody's* hands.

Who do you know now? What is your plan to get to know people? It's all about who you know - so go out there and meet people!


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1) Make a list of film related events within driving distance.
2) Make a list of people in the biz from your home town.
3) Is anyone in your town making movies?
4) Connections in your connections - who do you know who knows someone else?
5) What are you doing to *actively meet people* in the biz?


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Expanded version with more techniques to flesh out your Supporting Characters and make them individuals. Using the hit movie BRIDESMAIDS as well as other comedies like THE HANGOVER and TED and HIGH FIDELITY and 40 YEAR OLD VIRGIN and many other examples we look at ways to make your Supporting Characters come alive on the page. Print version was 48 pages, Kindle version is around 170 pages!

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ACT TWO SOLUTIONS!

*** ACT TWO SECRETS *** - For Kindle!


Expanded version with more techniques to help you through the desert of Act Two! Subjects Include: What Is Act Two? Inside Moves, The 2 Ps: Purpose & Pacing, The 4Ds: Dilemma, Denial, Drama and Decision, Momentum, the Two Act Twos, Subplot Prisms, Deadlines, Drive, Levels Of Conflict, Escalation, When Act Two Begins and When Act Two Ends, Scene Order, Bite Sized Pieces, Common Act Two Issues, Plot Devices For Act Two, and dozens of others. Over 67,000 words (that’s well over 200 pages) of tools and techniques to get you through the desert of Act Two alive! Print version was 48 pages, Kindle version is well over 200 pages!

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All About Rewrites!

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Rewriting In Waves?

*** REWRITES Blue Book! - For Kindle!


The end is just the beginning! You’ve finished your story, but now the rewriting begins! This 405 page book shows you how to rewrite your screenplay or novel to perfection. Everything from Character Consistency to Shoeboxing to How To Give And Receive Notes to 15 Solutions If Your Script’s Too Long! and 15 Solutions If Your Script’s Too Short! to Finding The Cause Of A Story Problem to Good Notes Vs. Bad Notes to Finding Beta Readers to Avoiding Predictability to Learning To Be Objective About Your Work to Script Killer Notes and Notes From Idiots to Production Rewrites and What The Page Colors Mean? and a Complete Rewrite Checklist! The complete book on Rewriting Your Story!

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All About Endings!

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GRAND FINALES Blue Book!

The Perfect Ending For Your Story!

The First Ten Pages Of Your Screenplay Are Critical,
But What About The Last 10 Pages?

Creating the perfect ending to your story! This 100,000 word book shows you how to end your story with a bang, rather than a whimper. Everything from Resolution Order to Act Three Tools to Happy or Sad Endings? to How The Beginning Of Your Story Has Clues To The Ending (in case you were having trouble figuring out how the story should end) to Falling Action to How To Avoid Bad Endings to Writing The Perfect Twist Ending to Setting Up Sequels & Series to Emotional Resolutions to How To Write Post Credit Sequences to Avoiding Deus Ex Machinas, to 20 Different Types Of Ends (and how to write them) and much more! Everything about endings for your screenplay or novel!

Only: $4.99


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All About LOGLINES, TREATMENTS, and PITCHING!

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LOGLINES, TREATMENTS, and PITCHING! Blue Book!

Distilling Your Screenplay!

Loglines, Treatments, Pitching, Look Books, Pitch Decks, One Pagers, Rip-O-Matics?

You have written a brilliant 110 page screenplay, but how do you get anyone to read it? You need to distill it down into some form of verbal moonshine or story rocket fuel that will ignite that bored development executive or manager or agent and get them to request your screenplay. But how do you shrink those 110 pages into a 25 word logline or a 2 minute elevator pitch or a one page synopsis or a short paragraph? This 100,000 word book shows you how! Everything you need to know! From common logline mistakes (and how to solve them) to how your pitch can reveal story problems to the 4 types of pitches!

272 Pages - ONLY $4.99!


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THE BUISINESS SIDE

*** BREAKING IN BLUE BOOK *** - For Kindle!


Should really be called the BUSINESS BLUE BOOK because it covers almost everything you will need to know for your screenwriting career: from thinking like a producer and learning to speak their language, to query letters and finding a manager or agent, to making connections (at home and in Hollywood) and networking, to the different kinds of meetings you are will have at Studios, to the difference between a producer and a studio, to landing an assignment at that meeting and what is required of you when you are working under contract, to contracts and options and lawyers and... when to run from a deal! Information you can use *now* to move your career forward! It's all here in the Biggest Blue Book yet!

Print version was 48 pages, Kindle version is over 400 pages!

$4.99 - and no postage!




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