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Many things get *better* with age.

For instance - T-Bills, Wine, Most Cheeses, and even many actresses. There are some starlets who looked gawky as 20 year olds and are hot as 30 year olds. You may not have noticed this, but Racquel Welch has forgotten to age - she's still hot, and could probably be your great grandmother. When Heather Locklear, who is over 50 years old, was arrested for drunk driving a few years back, her *mug shot* was hot. Compared to most celeb mugshots, hers looked like the discard from a fashion shoot. Some things get better with age...

Like your screenplay.

Many writers finish their screenplays and want to make copies and bind it and put it in the mail to some contest or, worse, some producer. Or PDF it and email it. They are so excited they send their script out before it's ripe enough to consume. And when the contest reader bites into it, they spit it out - hard! sour! green!

The biggest mistake you can make is to send out your script too soon. You may have pulled a bunch of all-nighters to type FADE OUT so that you can get your script postmarked in time to make the Nichols... and as soon as it's in the mail and on its way, you discover the typo on page 3... and the one on page 7... and the ones on all of the other pages. Not your normal typos, what my friend Grant calls "spellos" - when you misspell one word but correctly spell another, so spell-check doesn't catch it... and the sentence reads like a drunken monkey wrote it. My favorite "spello" - because I write a lot of action films - is "shot".... and you may note that the o and i are next to each other on the keyboard. When you have a page where one character shot at another, it can make the reader wonder just what kind of movie this is.

But the bigger problem than "spellos"? It's your first draft, and it stinks.

That's right - it's crap. It needs a rewrite or two before it's ready to go out in the world.

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No, it's not some new martial art like Butt-Jitsu (the Japanese art of buttock wrestling) or that lethal Chinese foot combat, Toe-Fu... Shoeboxing is the art of finding objectivity for your work by setting it aside. Putting it in a box on the shelf and forgetting about it.

Have you ever read something you wrote a long time ago and thought, "Hey, that's pretty good, I forgot I wrote that!" Or (when I read some of my old stuff), "I can't believe I wrote that line - it just... sucks!" By putting your script aside for a while and thinking about something else, you're able to come back to it with "fresh eyes" - it's as if you are reading someone else's script. You have that detachment, that objectivity, to see your script clearly. Usually we are so close to out scripts, we can't see their flaws. But time gives us the distance we need to find the flaws and weak points and correct them.

Even the writers who don't finish their first drafts and shove them in an envelope for some contest or producer often want to start the second draft right away, and keep rewriting the same script until they think it's ready. Their script could use some time in the shoebox, too. Lock that sucker away and forget about it, so that when you do come back to work on the next draft, you read what is on the page, not what is in your memory.

True story - I had a script that had gone through a bunch of rewrites and went out to producers and was almost bought by one of the producers of MEMENTO to set up at Universal. There were *three* companies interested at the time, and someone else offered a better deal. I went with them... and nothing happened. The option lapsed. That script went on the shelf and I went to work on something else. Years later, a friend wanted to read it, and afterwards they said one thing confused them - how did these specific characters get to this location. They seemed to just show up in one scene. I said, "No, there's a scene where they arrive..." and flipped through the script, unable to find the scene. It was in my brain, and everyone who had read it so far had just imagined that scene - but it did not exist. And it *was* confusing. Because I hadn't read the script in years, when I reread it, *I* was confused. Your mind can play tricks on you - things you thought were on the page may not be there. So you need to give yourself some distance before coming back to do the next draft.

CROSS TRAINING

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Depending on how good your memory is, it may take you a while to forget about that first draft. We have this habit of thinking about our scripts while we're working on them, even if we are doing something else: standing in line at the post office, doing laundry, driving to work, making dinner, being at work, taking a shower, making love with our spouse... So just putting the script aside may not clear your mind of it. You need to think about something else... some other script. So writing that one script over and over until you get it right is usually a bad plan, a better plan is to write another script.

I usually alternate drafts on scripts. Instead of finishing the first draft and then starting on the second draft, I start on some other first draft. I take my mind off one script by writing another. And I try to vary the type of scripts that I write. Even if I am working in the same genre, I don't finish a buddy action script and write another buddy action script. Not only would that be confusing at times, it's using the same mental muscles. I want to use different muscles. So I may move from a buddy action film to a chase thriller or a revenge story or something else that is very different than the first script, even if it is in the same genre. Because I also write horror and science fiction sometimes, those get thrown into the mix with action and thrillers. And on my big list are some comedy scripts that may or may not make it to the page next year. "Cross training" not only helps to take your mind off that other script, it keeps you from getting bored with your work and bored with that one script. Rewriting the same script over and over is like having the same meal every night. After a while you get sick of it. You don't ever want to get sick of your script - you want it to be fresh and exciting. When you come back to the first script after writing the second, it's like an old friend you haven't seen in a while. You're excited to get back to work on it... And when you finish the second draft of that first script, you'll be excited to get back to work on that second script. You don't just get "fresh eyes" that give you objectivity for the rewrite, you get *refreshed* by taking a little working vacation from that script.

The great thing about "cross training" with different genres or subgenres is that something you may learn while writing that horror script may improve the buddy action script. Just like with physical cross training, one set of muscles helps another. You may not see how writing a rom-com can help you with your buddy action script, but you might discover a technique or have a breakthrough when dealing with the rom-com relationship that will improve the relationship of your two cops (one who lives by the rules, one who lives to break the rules). By writing the same type of script all of the time, or the same script over and over again; you aren't working those other muscle groups. You don't want to be the guy with one huge arm and one scrawny arm. The *drama* in your buddy cop movies needs to be just as well written as the action and the comedy. Shoeboxing your script and working on another script that uses different creative skills is not only a great way to get some distance and objectivity, it strengthens you as a writer.

FEEDBACK & SELF FEEDBACK

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When you get ready to take the script out of the shoebox and get back to work on it, *that's* when you give it to people you trust to get some feedback. You want their notes and feelings to be fresh when you start the next draft. If you get their notes before you put away your script, you'll just be thinking about them the whole time - and that means you are thinking about your script, and that defeats the purpose of shoeboxing.

There's another tip about getting notes and feedback, but the main thing is not to take any of it personally. Nobody takes the time to read your script and give you feedback because they hate you - they do it to help you. So don't get defensive... or at least, control it. Not every note and bit of feedback is going to be something you use in the rewrite, sometimes it just helps you see the script through the eyes of others.

But *before* you get any notes or feedback from others, you need to read your script again with your new "fresh eyes" and give yourself notes. Really look for places where the script becomes confusing, or a line doesn't work or the dialogue is weak or the action is unclear or characters do things that seem weird. Give yourself some tough notes. It does you no good to give the script a "fresh eye" read to see how brilliant you are, you want to look for the flaws and faults and problems. Be hard on yourself. Pretend it's someone else's script. You want to find all of the weaknesses so that you can strengthen them in the next draft.

People often ask how many times they should rewrite a script, and the answer is - as many times as it takes. Some scripts will take longer than others. You may be putting one script back in that shoebox on the shelf a dozen times. Don't be in a rush to get your script in the mail to a contest or producer, wait until it is ready. Would you rather the producer read a script from you that has problems, or read a script that is great enough to buy and put into production? Let the script age until it is ready to be served. Then, pop the cork and celebrate your final draft.

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