Martell's "Theory of Dog Energy" is that all dogs have the exact
same amount of
energy. For a normal sized dog, like a Retriever or a Shepard, that's the perfect
amount of energy... but a really big dog barely has enough energy to move (which
explains St. Bernards) and really small dogs have LOTS of extra energy (which
This theory also works with characters. In order to be memorable to the audience
everyone in the script has to have the minimum daily requirement of character... the same
amount of character no matter how big or small the part is. This is easy when you are
dealing with lead characters who have 110 pages to meet their minimum
requirements, you can spread it out. A little character here, a little character there. You
can be subtle... show character through actions or show gradual changes in reactions
to similar situations. Lead characters can take a while to get to know... you have the
time to peel back layers and show us different, conflicting aspects of the character.
But when you have a supporting character who may only be in a couple of scenes,
the character is going to come in strong, concentrated doses in order to meet the
minimum requirements. Patrick Shane Duncan (Mr. HOLLAND'S OPUS, COURAGE
UNDER FIRE) says that the less time a character spends on screen, the broader
(bigger) that character has to be to make an impression on the audience. With a small
character, you don't have the time to build character... they have to come fully
assembled. They also have to come on strong enough to leave an impression... or the
audience will forget who they are. They aren't on screen long enough to be subtle.
The smaller the character the more exaggerated or quirky they need to be.
The British film BEND IT LIKE BECKHAM was nominated for a Writer's Guild Award a few years back.
As Ebert said on that little TV show of his,
"If you liked GREEK WEDDING, you'll love BEND IT LIKE BECKHAM" - it's much better
written than GREEK WEDDING and much funnier. The story is simple - Parminder Nagra plays Jessie, a high school
senior who loves playing soccer, but her traditionalist Indian parents think it's time for her to
stop playing games, learn to cook, and find a husband. If she can't find a nice Indian boy on her
own, her parents would be happy to find one for her (arranged marriages are part of the
tradition). Talk about universal stories - how many of us have dreams and parents who think it's
time to wake up and find a real job? In order to dramatize the concept of finding a husband and
settling down, the story takes place in the months leading up to her older sister's wedding. That
way we can SEE what her parents want for her. The traditional wedding isn't an abstract idea -
we can see the steps involved. The other side of the dramatic dilemma is represented when Jessie is
asked to join a girl's soccer league... and becomes one of the team's top players.
That's how BECKHAM ends up with a huge cast of characters. We have Jessie's family and all
of the relatives in town for the wedding (plus the in-laws and their family) and we have the
soccer team, her coach, and her best friend on the team Jules (Keira Knightly).... plus we have Jessie's parents.
Oh, and there are Jessie's neighborhood pals - she plays soccer in the park with them. They're all
hunky Indian guys who see her as a pal rather than dating material. She's too much of a
You might think with this huge cast of characters that we wouldn't get to know any of them
very well, but you'd be wrong. Writers Gurinder Chadha and Paul Berges do a fantastic job of distilling each character
down to their essentials so that we instantly know them. Her team mates and coach are people
you know, her family is your family, and the guys at the park are your pals. To illustrate how well
this is done - there's a minor character at the engagement party - I don't think he has a single line
of dialogue... but you really know who this guy is. At the engagement party, an entire sofa full of
aunts and old women ask Jessie when she's going to get married... and what kind of Indian boy
interests her - a clean-shaven man or one with a full bushy beard? A bearded guest at the
engagement party pushes closer to overhear her answer. This guy may be traditionally dressed,
but he gives off a Disco Dan vibe... and later when there is dancing he grabs Jessie and tries to
force her to dance with him. Yikes! This is the Indian community's most eligible bachelor!
Throughout the rest of the film, whenever there's a family function in preparation for the
wedding, this guy is there to hit on Jessie. He may not have any dialogue, but he shows his
character through actions. This guy is all hands! He's constantly inappropriately touching women
- his hand slips while dancing. In one scene he "accidentally" nuzzles the breasts of a woman
he's dancing with.
Though this is a only a minor character, he symbolizes Jessie's worst nightmare
- he's the guy she could have to marry if her parents opt for an arraigned marriage. That is his character's STORY PURPOSE -
remember, even if you have a cast of thousands, each character must have a purpose in the story... why else
would you pay an actor $650 a day to play the role? If the have no purpose - cut them. By the end of
the film Jessie's worst nightmare husband has found a single gal who doesn't mind the way his hands slip when they are
dancing... and they end up making out in the bathroom at the wedding reception. This guy
may not spend much time on screen, but he is given a juicy character and juicy actions that
expose his character in every scene he's in. You really know who this guy is.
All of the other characters in BEND IT LIKE BECKHAM are also well-drawn. Jessie's father (Anupam Kher),
who spends much of the film in the background, is a fully developed character. We know him,
we understand him, we care about him... we feel HIS dilemma of being a traditional man with a
modern daughter. There's a great scene when he sneaks into a soccer game and watches his
daughter play - at first angry that she has disobeyed him, then slowly becoming involved in the
game and rooting for her. Again - the key is to know the essence of the character and find
situations the pull the character to the surface.
Are your small characters big enough? If they only pop up in two scenes, is there
enough CHARACTER in the first scene so that the audience can easily remember
them in the second scene? Do all of your characters meet the minimum requirements?
Loglines, Treatments, Pitching, Look Books, Pitch Decks, One Pagers, Rip-O-Matics?
You have written a brilliant 110 page screenplay, but how do you get anyone to read it? You need to distill it down into some form of verbal moonshine or story rocket fuel that will ignite that bored development executive or manager or agent and get them to request your screenplay. But how do you shrink those 110 pages into a 25 word logline or a 2 minute elevator pitch or a one page synopsis or a short paragraph? This 100,000 word book shows you how! Everything you need to know! From common logline mistakes (and how to solve them) to how your pitch can reveal story problems to the 4 types of pitches!
Making Your Own Movie?
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You will be writing for BUDGET. On a standard spec screenplay, you don’t have to think about budget, but these types of screenplays writing with budget in mind is critical!
If you are making your own movie, budget, is even more important - and you need to think about budget *before* you write your screenplay... or you will end up with a script that you can’t afford to make (or is a struggle to make). Everyone is making their own films these days, and even if you have done it before there are lots of great techniques in this book to get more money on screen - for less money! You can make a film that looks like it cost millions for pocket change.
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ARE YOUR SCENES IN THE RIGHT ORDER? AND ARE THEY THE RIGHT SCENES?
Your story is like a road trip... but where are you going? What's the best route to get there? What are the best sights to see along the way? Just as you plan a vacation instead of just jump in the car and start driving, it's a good idea to plan your story. An artist does sketches before breaking out the oils, so why shouldn't a writer do the same? This Blue Book looks at various outlining methods used by professional screenwriters like Wesley Strick, Paul Schrader, John August, and others... as well as a guest chapter on novel outlines. Plus a whole section on the Thematic Method of generating scenes and characters and other elements that will be part of your outline. The three stages of writing are: Pre-writing, Writing, and Rewriting... this book looks at that first stage and how to use it to improve your screenplays and novels.
Most screenplays are about a 50/50 split between dialogue and description - which means your description is just as important as your dialogue. It just gets less press because the audience never sees it, the same reason why screenwriters get less press than movie stars. But your story will never get to the audience until readers and development executives read your script... so it is a very important factor. Until the movie is made the screenplay is the movie and must be just as exciting as the movie. So how do you make your screenplay exciting to read? Description is important in a novel as well, and the “audience” does read it... how do we write riveting description?
William Goldman says the most important single element of any screenplay is structure. It’s the skeleton under the flesh and blood of your story. Without it, you have a spineless, formless, mess... a slug! How do you make sure your structure is strong enough to support your story? How do you prevent your story from becoming a slug? This Blue Book explores different types of popular structures from the basic three act structure to more obscure methods like leap-frogging. We also look at structure as a verb as well as a noun, and techniques for structuring your story for maximum emotional impact. Most of the other books just look at *structure* and ignore the art of *structuring* your story. Techniques to make your story a page turner... instead of a slug!
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